Monday, September 5, 2011

Our own calligrams

We have been working on our own calligrams for homework.  Here are some that we have done:

by Connie

By Emma

By Alice



We would love to know what you think. 
What do you like about them? How do you think they could be improved if they were to do them again?

8 comments:

  1. Great work! I like grOWS and s t r e c h !!
    Beryl (UK)

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  2. I really really like your blog mrs.Elric and I also really like the Calligrams and shape poems. Can I also share my works here?

    Best Wishes,
    Silvia

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  3. Thank you Silvia. Your friends have done some good work this week. I would love to see the work that you have done. I will come and see it on Tuesday when we're back in school.

    Mrs. Elrick

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  4. Thank you beryl
    Emma (Taiwan)

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  5. I like alice's dog it is cute and nice.

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  6. I like alice's dog it is cute and nice.


    wen ting B3GE

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  7. Yes, I like how Alice has turned some of her words in to calligrams. I like 'jump'. I also like Emma's 'leap' and Connie's 'bark'

    I think that you all did a great job!
    Mrs. Elrick

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