Poppy created and wrote a description of a disco setting. Here is her work:
Disco
As
I walked out side the fantastic disco I felt like I was inside the disco. I
begged my beautiful mum if I could go in. She said yes. I got a colourful
ticket. I got fantastic clothes. I didn't expect to get clothes. I
saw a shiny blue curtain hanging down. At the back there was a pink wall. There
was also a glamorous disco ball hanging down. There were some fantastic stars
reflecting from the disco ball. I zoomed
to my mum and danced gracefully.
Wow Poppy, what a beatufil description to match your diorama! Well done, I love all the adjectives you have used too. I will make sure Gan looks at this in England!
ReplyDeleteMummy
I like my diorama to!!!
ReplyDeletePoppy
I really think that you have done a great description for your diorama.
ReplyDeleteAlice
We love disco as well. Infact we have golden time and we have a choice to go to many places and we can go to the disco. Are group name is disco dinos.
ReplyDeleteby Tayler Kaif & Ashantay at barton clough year 3
I think your story about a disco is great
ReplyDeletewow poppy that is great we where nealy falling asleep but we read it all of your story.You are a very good story teller.We like the word gracefully. :) By Morgan and Olivia
ReplyDeleteWOW! that look's amazing. how did you do that.from barton clogh
ReplyDeleteWe lik discos and we lik haw you have maid your cardbourd piple and sinary . from lewis and molly.
ReplyDeleteI like your disco.
ReplyDeleteBy Grace