Connie made her diorama of a beautiful blue ocean. Here is her work:
Ocean
As I swim in the peaceful ocean I see magnificent creatures.
I see a gigantic orange octopus, an angry puffer fish, and a group of colorful
fish. I was so graceful! I smell salty
water. The seaweed is as bright as the sun.
I was so happy, the ocean is as
wonderful as life. The rocks are hard as a wooden table.
Hello from NZ!! My class, Room 7, is one of your quad blogging buddies this term and I'm so EXCITED to let them know.
ReplyDeleteWe are on our summner holiday at the moment and begin back at school on the 31st of January. That's when they can start reading your blogs and maing comments. :)
Looking forward to quadblogging with you. :)
Mrs Natusch
Vardon School
Hamilton
NZ
To Connie
ReplyDeleteYour writing is wonderful and descriptive. I love the adjectives you have used to describe the ocean and the creatures living in it.
I especially love the sentence...As I swim in the peaceful ocean I see magnificent creatures, because it paints a picture in my mind.
Well done!
Mrs Natusch
Hamilton
NZ
A lovley pice of writing there. nice punchwashen
ReplyDeleteagjectivs and conectivs
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