Jihyun made Antarctica. Here is her diorama and descriptive writing.
Antarctica
As the gigantic polar bear lumped slowly across the soft snow, she was freezing. The playful penguin went to the polar bear then she asked “I am so cold.” The penguin requested then he said “You can swim under the warm water.” So the polar bear said “Ok” Then she swam zooming like a motorcycle. But she was still freezing. So the polar bear went up and down with her feet through the water. Then she saw 2 people she went to the peoples and she said “I am turning like an ice.” So the 2people hugged like mummy’s hug. Then 2 people let it go. Now the polar bear settled down.
What a great description Jihyun. I love the way you describe how the polar bear moves across the soft snow. Keep up the fantastic work.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Elrick
great words next time you can put more detials but you a really good job for your diorama.
ReplyDeleteLeonna
great words but next time you can do a better job i love your diorama . leonna
ReplyDeletegreat work jihyun next time you maybe can improve your diorama by putting more detail in to it!
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