The ocean
As I swam through the busy ocean, I can see colourful fishes. I
noticed seaweed was
swaying. I notice a very long trumpet fish and an enormous sting ray and I saw different kind of other fishes.
I can see clean white cotton clouds. There is a strange sea worm
wiggling up and down. There is a diver searching for
different kind of fishes in the active sea. I can smell stinky stuff like stinky fish skin. I can taste
very salty water in the sea. I can hear
fishes swimming .The rock is as smooth as a feather. I can see fishes
swimming. And then a shark just went by and the diver shouted AHHH! And
the diver never swam in the ocean THE END
You have used some fantastic adjectives and verbs in your writing Leonna. I particularly like the strange sea worm wiggling up and down.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the hard work.
Mrs. Elrick
Leonna I like your similes and your story. By:Jihyun
ReplyDeleteI like your ocean.
ReplyDeleteBy grace
i like it
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love your work
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