Katelyne created a beach scene. Here is her diorama with the description of her setting.
At
The Beach
As I started walking the bright
reflection chased me by the bright yellow sun. Butterflies’ were calmly flying
across me and there were birds chirping in the air, there were groups of fish
splating across the ocean. People were relaxed and sat down reading a magazine
or sleeping. Making sand castles are fun.
Some people were eating snacks too. As the wind blows, the trash was crackling
in the sand, it came in my eyes. Although it was good fun, people put sun-block
and they probably got burned like a fire.
i don't like the look of people that got burned.
ReplyDelete~ Julia
I think you shald use a difrent word to bright.
ReplyDeletePoppy.
What kind of words might you use then Poppy? Well done for noticing that she has used the same word twice in a sentence.
ReplyDeleteI might choose the word 'dazzling'. What do you think?
Mrs. Elrick