Saturday, December 10, 2011

The Haunted House by Bryan

This is Bryan's description of his haunted house.




2 comments:

  1. Bryan, you have done a fantastic job of writing the description of your setting. You've used some great adjectives to create a spooky atmosphere.
    Keep up the good work
    Mrs. Elrick

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  2. benjamin Bryan your work is very good but can you make it more scary.

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