Friday, December 9, 2011

Antarctica by Toby

Toby created a scene in Antarctica.  Hear and read his superb description below:



Antarctica by Toby (mp3)


Antarctica
It is freezing in Antarctica. The freezing icicles peacefully start to leak. The icicles start to shiver and shake they fall with a tremendous bang. A lump of snow drifted lightly across the icy world dancing like a ballerina. Then a cold frosty wind is like blizzard. If you were there you would be deeply frozen! But if you wear a few very warm layers you can still stay alive. If you go into the arches you might get stabbed! The snow tastes like frosty ice-cream. You have to listen very hard if you want to hear the polar bears growling at their prey.

5 comments:

  1. What a great piece of work. Well done, Toby!

    By Iyen and Geert

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  2. Toby, You have done an amazing job. I love the simile of the lump of snow dancing like a ballerina. You should be very proud of the work you have done - keep it up!
    Mrs. Elrick

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  3. Great work toby!
    Jeremy Lu

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  4. I like the backround and the Moutian at the backround

    By Rion

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  5. You have some fantastic similes Toby.I like the way that you wrote the sentences.

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