Sunday, December 11, 2011

Wild Forest by Elliott

Elliott created a forest scene for his diorama.  Here is his work.




Wild forest

There is a wild forest with wild animals. A gibbon is swinging in the trees and the tiger and puma are growling fiercely. Leaves are falling from out the trees. I am swinging like the gibbon is.
The tiger also has good camouflage. The gibbon looks like he has a piggy nose and it is purple. His ears and nose holes are also purple. There is a sign and it sees WILD ANIMALS LIKE TIGERS AND PUMAS and the sign are made of wood.
In the forest there is a river.
The leaves that fall from the trees fall in the river and float towards the sea. If you feel the gibbons’ fur it will feel soft. The puma is facing the tree like it is a deer. He was almost going to eat the tree.The tiger is as orange as an orange, the gibbon is as yellow as a lemon and the puma is as brown as a brown bear.

1 comment:

  1. Elliott, you have worked so hard on your description. You have included some superb words and phrases. I really like 'growling fiercely' and 'I am swinging like the gibbon is'.
    Great work - keep it up!

    Mrs. Elrick

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