The
Forest
As I walked through the peaceful forest I
heard a frightening sound, so I tiptoed
towards it and it was a bright volcano erupting near me! I ran as
fast as I could so I wouldn’t get toasted. I noticed a boiling, bright sun shining right at
me (it was beautiful!) I was walking I saw a pretty tree but I touched it and It turned out to be very prickly! A colourful
bird chirping in the bright, blue sky. There
were some white clouds in the sky and I wished that I could reach up and touch
the soft, fluffy, white clouds!! I saw some scary bushes. In the middle of the
bushes I saw a hole and so I went down and
started to walk though and then I saw some
big, sharp, spiky thorns sticking out of the bushes and so i decided not to carry on!!!
What a great description Alice. You have made some very good word choices. I like the 'frightening sound' and 'bright volcano erupting near me'
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Mrs.Elrick
realy a fantastic work by kids .Art and discription together i hope they have learnt a lot.this term this was the best work all credit goes to you Mrs Elrick.and ofcourse kids.can you put krish work i would like to see it.
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