The bedroom
When
I walked to see my lovely family photo I forget the time to water my green
plant. I was so tired that I fell asleep on the carpet. When I woke up I
decided to pick the blue clothes from the shelf then I asked my friend to come
to my house they said yes. We made lots of things. When they got home I was too
tired that I fell asleep again. Then I dream about my dad coming back, that I
play really happily with my dad. Then I woke up and my dad was not there. Then
I realised it was a dream.
Grace, you worked really well on this and made good improvements from your draft. I like the adjectives you have used. Keep up the good work.
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